Empty

i sit here and stare at the screen... feeling like lifes just a dream..... when i fall asleep at night.... will i awake in morning light.... or will i awake in a deep dark space..... my body feels empty.... i dont know where to turn... i dont know where to run... this nightmare is no fun... please help me see... the light and harmony... help me escape this empty space....

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Amanda Fisher

Date: 3/3/2012 12:33:00 PM

I want to thank everyone for commenting.....You are all very inspirational....I am just getting used to this website

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 1:07:00 PM

Stopping back to read more of your excellent poetry today Amanda. Please continue with your writing and share it with us. Don't forget to enter some of the member contests. Love, Carol

William Crocker

Date: 12/7/2011 11:01:00 PM

Amanda, A very interesting write.I'm originally from Canada but now live in calif..I worked in the mines in the Yukon and Alaska and know the empty feeling one gets.Poetry will get you out of the empty places in a creative way.keep up the writing I like it