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Empathy Lost

A sickle held tight by ghostly figure, Thrashing humanity while they cross the land. They move like curled waves along a contour, Crashing into walls, governments demand. Rebuffed by anger, with cold callous hand, Where darkness inhabits the human heart. This flood from evil spills, starts to expand, Reaches shore, shrouded ghost and boy depart. Moment of pleasure for self-righteousness, With satisfaction worn as a warm coat. And with no empathy to possess, To welcome with open arms, remote. A cry for justice, their silence spits back, They'll face eternity, with heart now black. contest My favorite forms. 9/13/15

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Date: 10/14/2015 9:50:00 PM
Nice win. SKAT
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Date: 10/12/2015 5:12:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Frederic! Awesome write!
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Date: 10/10/2015 6:21:00 PM
Terrific Frederic...I chose the same theme in haibon form but your sonnet excels.
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Date: 10/10/2015 1:58:00 AM
This is an amazing and moving piece Frederic! Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 10/9/2015 1:13:00 PM
Nice write, Frederic
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:27:00 PM
My goodness, so sad and dark, but a VERY well written sonnet. For me it's about the refugees. And it could be about others who have been dealt injustice in life. Just wonderful, my friend.
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