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Emotional Weeds

21 oct 2014 3:45 PM My deepest feelings are so hard to express They have rooted in and overgrown to a mess Hacking away with the poetry mower The weeds grow faster and I get slower Clogging the drains so my tears flood my face Hiding the beauty what a disgrace I work so much on this overgrown mire That my house is neglected its condition is dire Oh why did I wait so many years letting them grow Why didn't I take care of them when they were small and easy to mow Now I am happy and then I am sad I am excited and then I am mad So much emotion in this garden once fair I want to give up but I just don't dare No my Father did not teach me to quit He taught me to get back up from each hit He gives me courage and strength through it all I will have it cleaned up one day once and for all

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Date: 11/4/2014 8:45:00 PM
Bobb, aint that the truth! This could easily be a compound poem with two or more meanings. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks
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Date: 11/5/2014 7:26:00 AM
It is a battle that we all fight and when one is working on letting go of the past the weeds are so well established that they can not be pulled out they have to be dug up and the earth purged to get rid of them. And it is a painful process but the reward of peace is so great that it is worth all the effort and pain. Thank you for your comment I am happy that you have enjoyed it.
Date: 10/21/2014 6:11:00 PM
powerful and introspective!
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