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''Emma''

Congratulations our pageant queen: Days and nights you nurtured nicety Like florist watching bud to petal; You starved yourself amidst abundance Nursing the shape , keeping the fitness; Today all eyes are forgotten on you, King and Queen’s mouths in agape; All craning out necks on their toes To have a glimpse of the newest queen: Emma, Emma, Emma rends the air. Contest's name : ''Emma'' Sponsor : Juli Michelle.

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Date: 11/8/2014 8:59:00 AM
What a masterful write. I was not here at the time so I am not familiar with the challenge all the same great poem.
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Date: 3/4/2014 1:26:00 PM
Nicely done, Ky! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/24/2014 6:30:00 PM
Ah yes, the lengths these beauty queens go to to stay in shape, nicely done Kay, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Date: 2/25/2014 12:23:00 PM
Thank you Richard,your comment delights me.
Date: 2/10/2014 6:02:00 AM
- Really a great "Emma" poem, Kayod5 !!! - Luck in contest !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/10/2014 6:25:00 AM
- My pleasure .......... to make others happy - Have a enjoyable new week! :)))))
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/10/2014 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Anne for being there for me all the times.
Date: 2/9/2014 8:36:00 PM
Hello...sounds like being a pageant queen isn't all fun but worth it....:-) :-) your poem is very pleasing...good luck in the contest..:-) :-)
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/9/2014 9:23:00 PM
Exactly D.J., to nurture beauty and brain is not all fun, keeping fit and forming shape can be challenging.Immense thanks for your reading and commendation,have a rewarding week Donna.
Date: 2/9/2014 5:38:00 PM
This is a solid write full of delight my friend! I surely loved reading this amazing poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/9/2014 9:14:00 PM
Thank you my Russell, have a rewarding week.
Date: 2/9/2014 11:28:00 AM
Hoping this poem captures the judges eyes as it has mine. I loved it.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/9/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thank you J. B. , have lovely week ahead.
Date: 2/9/2014 8:53:00 AM
This is a great write my friend. Good Luck in the contest.....Tim
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/9/2014 9:09:00 AM
Immense thanks Tim,have a lovely week ahead.
Date: 2/9/2014 8:53:00 AM
You effectively brought a nice balance of surprise, emotion and poetic magic, kayods...who is this pageant queen?... marvelously written!.. huggs
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 2/9/2014 9:22:00 AM
Thank you nette for your reading and commendation.The pageant queen is Emma ; yes, same Emma our friend.Have a wonderful week ahead.

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