Emily-A Voyage of Conception

upon imagination's sea- to solo sail,the world around,to see

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/16/2009 9:11:00 AM

flows nicely , enjoyed reading.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/12/2009 2:42:00 PM

Interestings ideas about Emily. Keep writing. Sara

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/12/2009 10:13:00 AM

I like this Senryu Brian, good job sir.....:JP]

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2009 9:45:00 AM

Luv this type of poetry u write, Brian, so cool, koolio as the Highlander would express to u... so enjoyed.. I just entered a letter poem for your My Dear contest.. don't know if this is what u wanted but I researched it on the Poetry Types on the Soup site so if its not compatible to what u had in mind please let me know and I will do another... thankxxx. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

John Freeman

Date: 11/12/2009 9:30:00 AM

Great Senryu, thats my kind of solo sail Brian. As I suppose I would be sick the whole time, on the actual trip. Smile. Sincerely, Moses