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Emerald Eyes

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Below is the poem entitled Emerald Eyes which was written by poet Alan Reed. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Emerald Eyes

Sparkle 
to opals do they lend 
shine 
to emeralds they offend 

exude 
the missive they can send 
glow 
despair they often mend 

burnish 
surpass and do not bend 
heal 
put right before the end 





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  1. Date: 6/9/2010 1:58:00 PM
    great flow with your words here my friend.. and thanks for the nice comment

  1. Date: 6/8/2010 6:15:00 AM
    This is wonderful. I like the rhyming scheme and how it moves the poem along. The title is consistent with the words. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 2:33:00 PM
    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family Alan.. already your work has impressed me... keep going.. with -luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 1:56:00 PM
    Such beauty in your lines Alan and thankxxx for your special comments on my contest poem.. entering contests on Soup is a great way to have your poetry noticed and read by many more on site.. look on the contest page to enter one of your poem fitting the requirements... my birth stone is the emerald..so I am drawn to your words.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 1:05:00 PM
    enjoyed, ... p.d.