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Embracing Eve

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Embracing Eve

The moon that eve brought was full
Enlightened grays, overwhelming dulls
Silence softened textures, once rough
Vibrant shimmers, quietly caressed.

Sometime simplicities, suffer obsessed
I sought your touch, a tempting silhouette
Seeking again to gain, a moments you
Too taste, too blend, and too know.

Still you heard not my approach?
Even as from swift turnings I slowed
My feet, as yours, bared, touched down
Although, the calloused experienced
Rarely feels ground.

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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 7:31:00 PM
    I can relate to this poem, so easily understood by both sides. Very nice. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 2/14/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Fifteen" contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Michael. Very good poetry. :)

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 3:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win Michael. This is a good write.

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Very nice. Congratulations on your 3rd place win in Brian's contest................S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Big congratulations to you on your win. I like the softness this evokes.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:23:00 AM
    MICHAEL,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 5:35:00 PM
    congrats Michael on an excellent win for this wonderful write luv..

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 3:35:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in the contest..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Perritano Avatar Michael Perritano
    Date: 2/11/2012 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:26:00 PM
    Congrats! I enjoyed reading tonight. Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on a great write and a great placement in the contest. Jon

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 4:14:00 PM

    Perritano Avatar Michael Perritano
    Date: 2/11/2012 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you