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Embodiment of a Sparrow

Embodiment of a sparrow Deft hand became stifled One man's life becomes a ripple Gauntlet affixes a bridle Proclaimed a idol Fist clenching low Archer's imbued bow Body quivered like his arrows Embodiment of a sparrow Anthem for a obscured soul Wind is a bitter blow Gauntlet's icy hold Prolonged the cold Events transpired, Such that brought down an empire Whistling tone of his arrows Embodiment of sparrows

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Date: 8/3/2016 1:10:00 AM
I stated poem that you wrote not point. Have a blessed night.
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Date: 8/3/2016 1:06:00 AM
I always enjoyed the quote darkest before the dawn. I saw you post that as a reply to a point. I agree with that quote. I have read this poetry. It was beautifully written. Thank you for the quote, it brought back a smile.
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Justin Worthy
Date: 9/6/2016 1:34:00 PM
Thanks man. Gksd I could bring some light to u
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Justin Worthy
Date: 9/6/2016 1:34:00 PM
Glad*
Date: 5/24/2015 11:51:00 PM
JUSTIN, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Justin Worthy
Date: 5/25/2015 8:08:00 PM
Thanks SKAT :)
Date: 5/13/2015 12:19:00 PM
Justin, a deep first poem, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 5/12/2015 2:13:00 PM
JUSTIN. Thank you for sharing, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Justin Worthy
Date: 5/12/2015 5:49:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poetry... much love :)

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