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Embers of Time

They sat beside each other in a classroom long ago; he says he had a crush on her, she says she did not know. Now their footsteps softly echo in the hallways where they walked; school house walls, were they not silent, would divulge the words they talked. Old bully Time, pushing , shoving, maneuvering our lives along; once looking back, we wonder . . . was this the right choice or the wrong? Yesterday. he did not speak a word, silence-- struck dumb by boyish fears; he went his way, she went her own- counting twinned rosaries of tears. Faye Lanham Gibson Copyright, 4-20-2014

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Date: 5/23/2014 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 5/22/2014 11:38:00 PM
fine write, faye.. applause to you and huggs
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:34:00 PM
Faye, , Congratulations, a beautiful " Embers Of Time" theme..... Always~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2014 5:12:00 PM
Hmmm, I wonder who the shy gentleman (?) is that you refer to here. Lemme think a sec...Naw, CAN'T be! Faye, I am SO happy and proud that you entered this gem in Gail's contest! Your gonna break the top 100 before you know it...
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Faye Gibson
Date: 5/20/2014 5:32:00 PM
We will see....thanks for the inspiration.
Date: 5/20/2014 1:25:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine fine, Faye
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Date: 5/19/2014 10:32:00 PM
Such a beautiful write Faye n equally wonderful is the win ! huge congrats !
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Date: 5/19/2014 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win Faye
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Date: 5/19/2014 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your high marks in the contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/1/2014 1:36:00 PM
How sad... But I love your work.
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Date: 4/22/2014 8:40:00 PM
This is sad, but good. Sometimes things are not meant to be. Thanks for sharing... Lucy
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/23/2014 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Lucilla.
Date: 4/22/2014 7:14:00 AM
I so relate to this. As a boy I had so many crushes and lovely imaginations of what could have been. I woder if the reality would have been as sweet?
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Date: 4/21/2014 8:45:00 PM
Oh Faye, this brings back so many memories... of high school shyness towards girls and how many relationships might have been but for the hesitation to say a simple hello. A beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. Peace...Sam
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Date: 4/21/2014 8:18:00 AM
Oh mercy me Faye...I am SO thrilled and honored that you chose this subject for the contest...You wouldn't BELIEVE how many times and how long I regretted my shyness...Your two lines: "Once looking back, we wonder... Was this the right choice or the wrong?" followed by the last four say it all... I am SO happy and proud to see you entering contests! I see a win in this one and many more to come...
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/21/2014 8:18:00 PM
My dear friend...how sweet you are. I just woke up the other day and these words were in my head. I write in my sleep. Do you?
Date: 4/21/2014 2:25:00 AM
Very nice, Faye. An entertaining adventure. Thank you for the trip! Hugs, Mel :)
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Faye Gibson
Date: 4/21/2014 7:58:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by...read your latest and found up to your usual high standards.

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