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Ella and Peyton Forever Friends

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Ella is overjoyed when her friend Peyton comes to play They have a special bond; it has always been that way You’ll find them having fun together on a sunny day Playing in the park where on the swings they’ll sway When Ella has a sleepover then Peyton comes to stay The last time it was special as it was on her birthday They have a secret code but mummy knows the things they say If Ella says a certain special word then Peyton must obey! Ella says he’s her boyfriend and they will get wed one day Nick is saving hard for their wedding, as he’ll have bills to pay! Fictional write based on photo Laura Loo’s contest Personal Memories Monorhyme II 05~26~16

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2016 12:25:00 PM

Jan, this is a great write congratulations on your win Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 6/18/2016 12:33:00 PM

Thanks Eve I am so glad LuLoo liked it:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/16/2016 4:27:00 PM

Nice! I believed it!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:34:00 AM

Thanks Kim - lets hope it comes true one day:-):-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 6/16/2016 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan, very well written poem

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2016 1:34:00 AM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/16/2016 10:40:00 AM

Very nice poem, they are lovely and advanced so saving for the day of wedding. Sweet poem my lovely smiling friend. Congrats on your win and a 7. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 2:10:00 PM

I want an invite to the wedding if my prediction does come true lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 6/16/2016 8:00:00 AM

Jan, this was so cute because me and my friend Angel (Peytons mom) always dream of them getting married one day.Congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 2:10:00 PM

Oh Wow LuLoo what an amazing co-incidence - lets hope dreams come true!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/16/2016 7:50:00 AM

Very sweet poem for this contest, Jan. Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2016 2:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

James Tate

Date: 5/28/2016 5:42:00 PM

What an imagination. Way to go Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/28/2016 6:36:00 PM

Thanks so much James - i do hope Luloo likes my take on the picture:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/27/2016 5:50:00 AM

So delightfully charming! It touches the chords of innocence lost! A seven dear, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2016 5:58:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/26/2016 10:07:00 PM

Jan, my youngest daughter had a little friend like this she grew up with who lived across the street from us. They moved to Boston a few years ago. He flew from Boston to Hawaii to be at her wedding. They are still besties! Loved your poem and the warmth it exuded #7 ; )

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2016 5:44:00 AM

Oh how lovely Connie that shows the strength of true friendship:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2016 8:45:00 PM

so cute and clever you are, Jan. Does she have their names over there?? I better check that one out again!!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2016 5:37:00 AM

Yes the names are on the photo I do hope LuLoo likes my interpretation of the photo:-) hugs Jan xx

Pam Deremer

Date: 5/26/2016 3:47:00 PM

A very nice poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 3:56:00 PM

Thanks Pam I do hope luloo likes my interpretation of it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/26/2016 3:45:00 PM

Cute poem Jan...lots of fun

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 3:47:00 PM

Thanks Tim I hope LuLoo approves of my take on the image:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/26/2016 3:37:00 PM

Very nice poem in contest. Last two lines forced me to smile, very sweet. Loved always my lovely friend, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 3:47:00 PM

Total fiction BL ... but who knows what the future holds for these lovely friends:-) hugs Jan xx