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Words flow like a babbling brook, To my home, muse lets me look. A farmstead by the rush. Whisper in my ear, ancestor cheer, comedic discuss. A choice for some, prince or slum. Forward thinking, and digital dumb. Can we walk? Soulful spirit and painless run? Journey end, expedition begun. One of three, three of one, To flight, to absorb the here and gone. Memory and conscience, Hammer or tongue. Soulful challenge, to fit or belong, Codswallop with angelic song. Pain soup all the way, fire and flame, Your shine. . . Our shame. -The Northern Poet-

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/13/2018 6:44:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Edward, you have a way of writing a poem that rhymes and flows nicely..
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Date: 12/29/2016 11:34:00 PM
Edward, I really like this, and I don't know all of the "whys." I guess that's part of it. : ) Cheers, Doug.
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Edward Micheals
Date: 1/6/2017 2:13:00 PM
Hey Doug, Thank you so much for your feedback, i am really glad you enjoyed my poem. I really struggle typing stuff up as i am dyslexic so my poetry sometimes gets lost in translation. :) All the best Doug and thanks again. EM.

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