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elicit thoughts

as i sit here
my  thoughts thunder
in with the eventide

the orb of night
lights a path
as i walk along
i watch my shadow dance
tree limbs reach towards me
i can almost feel your hands
touching me

tonight's air is warm
like your breath 
as it falls against me

i hear the ebb
of your breathing
mingled within
this slight breeze
and i wish you here

fireflies flicker 
like stars and your eyes
and i become lost again
deep in my thoughts

the aroma of summertide lingers
through the garden,
i reach for a flower
its petal is moist and soft
like a brush from your lips
i can't help long for you
as the iris closes it petals
and surrenders to night

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Classy, sexy, and sensual and a beautiful poem!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 9:03:00 PM
    You describe a paradise, well done Sandra, your pen brush is light and airy, xxx

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 8:49:00 PM
    amazingly beautiful piece of writting blooming like a rose in a beautiful heart

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 6:45:00 PM
    Hi Sandra, Nice summer romantic thoughts coming from this one.. Regards, Ken..