Elevation

Spurned faces muck in the dust Raised by ceaseless motion Of cyclical concerns Waves settle in lapped sounds Falling into synchronicity On the line of the horizon Plummet line sun draws tight things Moon soothes caress, balm of the earthbound creatures Clouds fly slow fast Petrified in yawning quick glory of surprise Breakthroughs Drawn up and through Splayed upon the dimensionless Foreground

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2015 9:23:00 PM

Hi James, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

James Kennon
Date: 9/28/2015 6:43:00 AM

Hi Linda Glad to hear from you, I will try and return what is given to me and enjoy the great content here. -Jim

Skat A

Date: 9/22/2015 6:57:00 PM

James, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

James Kennon
Date: 9/22/2015 7:14:00 PM

Hello, Thanks for the warm welcome. Just got my butt handed to me in a poetry forums, a strict one. lol....but thats ok I get good responses on my blog. Thanks for the warm welcome though, much appreciated. My name is Jim from NY, just started writing again after not really doing it for 15 or years so since college ,and having fun with it on my blog and around the net. Thanks