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Element of Earth

Quietly, heaven paints the earth Brown and orange of meadow's birth; Picturesque view, a season’s tray Refreshing the fields on display To shed harvest in rich glory, Splashing grains through a dazzling way. And blue dust glistens through the trees Hills from her feet swirls with new breeze; While children on dunes reel and run free Leaves dancing a cycle's pirouette; That nature spins on a trapeze, Stem to stem, my earth-tune's duet. Mar 10, 2016 ELEMENTS Part 1: EARTH Contest

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Date: 4/10/2016 3:26:00 PM
What a lovely and enjoyable poem. Good luck in the contest..........A.M.
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Date: 3/20/2016 11:34:00 PM
Rhoma, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
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Date: 3/18/2016 2:08:00 PM
Hi Rhoma, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:00:00 AM
Indeed picturesque....
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Date: 3/17/2016 1:50:00 AM
cycle's pirouette ... spins on a trapeze ... earth-tune's duet. A very musical ode to Element Earth. I like it. Well done!
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhoma :)
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Date: 3/16/2016 10:49:00 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Rhoma... big congrats!
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Date: 3/16/2016 7:37:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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