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Elegy

Christmas Eve; mired in her melancholy, wrapped in present reveries that she alone may open, though there'll be no new surprises, only loss, and somber songs to accompany the pictures of her son; (forsaken by the light she's not quite ready for exposure.) Crows squawk a chorus in a leaden sky and there's a sprinkling of snow as mourners cluster black and white like so many stoic penguins round the gaping wound of earth. The box so tragically small reverberates, sealing the fate of one taken too early from the fight. Well-wishers scatter to their cars, start up their cell phones, return to Saturdays spent manicuring lawns and custom fingernails. Bereft of a daily blueprint, her aching loss too new for time to render any pleasure, still she has her novels and her neighbors, her crosswords and her cat and a pain deep in her heart for which there is no measure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 5/2/2009 6:26:00 AM
Sad but well done! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 4/30/2009 2:57:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 4/29/2009 12:21:00 PM
Powerful poem, a reminder that the holidays are truly a sad time for some. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 4/29/2009 12:20:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week Keith, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 10:36:00 AM
Keith, congrats on having your poem featured this week!!!!!!
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Date: 4/27/2009 3:15:00 PM
Seems there are no words can describe loss, yet we all keep trying. It helps somehow. Congrats on this selection. Love, daver
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Date: 4/27/2009 10:28:00 AM
Congrats Keith on your elegy, "Elegy" being featured. This one touches the heart. No one but another mother could understand the pain that you write so eloquently of. Great write. Vince
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Date: 4/27/2009 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Keith. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2009 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week Keith Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/26/2009 10:10:00 PM
Hello Keith, congrats on your featured poem. MIne is also featurd this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/26/2009 7:35:00 PM
great writing once again Mr.Bickerstaffe, you don't disappoint
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Date: 4/26/2009 3:17:00 PM
This is sad and so touching. Such a loneliness speaks from between the lines. Congratulations on this poignant poem being in the featured section this week! Well written, Keith. ~ Best wishes, Carrie
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Date: 11/28/2008 11:37:00 AM
This is so beautifully written. Very heartfelt and moving. My son was born too early and I remember those first days. I didn't know how I was going to get through the hours, let alone the days, that followed. My faith gave me the strength. As always thank you for sharing your wonderful talents and heartfelt words. Love Robin
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