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El Sol

the day awakes, beautiful morn, the sun risen, a unique dawn it's yellow rays, in earthly space does cast on me, it's newest grace, it reflects, shines, from east to west, it's hands feel all, eyes see the rest, what beauty seen by my two eyes? that helps me more, to be alive. always ignored and neglected- by mindless men and those unfed. yet it still shines, and all the more, kindles the earth, at every dawn, so beautifully, too beautifully! daily miracle, so heavenly. earth's source of life, celestial light, the pauper's hope, the bourgeois' guide. all things solaced, in it's mild rays, thus waits the night, and crave for day. beacon of hope! sweet light above! what thing would be without your love? /here comes the sun contest/ 8/2/2014

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Date: 11/5/2015 12:55:00 PM
WOW, I'm so enchanted by your words Dominic, OMG... A fav The title brightens my day. El Sol. for some reason I find the word SUN romantic when said in Spanish. Thank you for sharing your celestial light. Love SKAT
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/5/2015 2:17:00 PM
:) aren't your comments adorably inspiring... thanks dear!
Date: 12/28/2014 1:11:00 PM
Very expressive poem of beauty.
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 10/22/2015 5:12:00 PM
Merci Beaucoup Etienne!
Date: 3/28/2014 11:41:00 PM
Hi Dom, wonderful imagery... Enjoyed the light, and love that follows. xox~ Linda
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Dominic Amezimi
Date: 3/29/2014 3:28:00 AM
thanks alot, that is so comforting coming from you

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