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Eight Years Younger

I am eight years younger,
Some words took me back to past.
I live in the moments
The years took it away so fast.

Like before,
I am hoping for morning not to show up.
As soon as my words observe the ray of the sun
They all shut up.
Your memories
Your smile is the guest of my notebook.
Before the moon say goodbye,
Let me write
Some more words for your eyes and your good look.

Do you know?
The moon has witnessed all of my poems
And the feelings for you.
Do you know?
I have hidden all of my words from the sun
 And every morning view.

Do you remember the sleepless nights?
Do you remember the view of the moon?
I live in those moments
Ignoring the age that went by so soon.

I am eight years younger,
Facing the mirror of my feelings I am ignoring my gray hair. 
I am fighting with those feelings that I am unable to share.

Copyright © Goran Rahim

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  1. Date: 11/6/2012 8:40:00 AM
    A great write and very enjoyable read Goran. Love, Carol