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Eglantine

Forsake me not, for I would pine and waste, like tendrils on the vine that shrivel when the rains abscond and nullify our special bond. For eglantine shall flourish not when kept in shade, stilled in the pod, nor will our love, without the spark of nature, and the love of God. Remain here, nestled in my care, and feel the measure of His power, with nourishment for heart and soul, as the elements sustain the flower.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/26/2013 12:21:00 PM
Such a romantic soul you have. I truely love reading your work.
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:30:00 AM
Hi Keith - A rose is a rose and a poem by Keith is a poem by Keith. I'm not sure what the previous observation means but it's good. You are the master once more at perfect rhyme and truthful heart. Love you and hope you are well. I'm recovering (nicely) from a knee replacement.
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Date: 9/29/2013 1:51:00 PM
Really smooth rendition on your awareness of object and subject and here also; a super overall ambience Keith..' Good piece indeed!
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Date: 9/28/2013 12:25:00 AM
Hi Keith , long time no see, hope you doing well, really enjoyed this poem, a 10 on 7 !!!!
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