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Below is the poem entitled Eden which was written by poet Alex W.. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Confined like a caged animal
Perpetually encased in lead flesh
No longer entrusted to freedom
Faith turned bitter with rebuke
Hatred overwhelming curiosity’s innocence
Power betraying underlying greed
Eternally ruining peace’s realm
Endless shadows formed under serpentine chaos
Repeating continuously into the dark
Forever at a battle with light

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  1. Date: 7/25/2012 5:51:00 PM
    great write Alex,dark side of Eden

    W. Avatar Alex W.
    Date: 7/25/2012 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you.
  1. Date: 7/20/2012 3:08:00 AM
    Great lines you`ve written here,Alex.Enjoyed the honesty in this gem.My favorite line is "hatred overwhelming curiosity`s innocence".Take Care,Arild

    W. Avatar Alex W.
    Date: 7/20/2012 3:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the feedback!