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Eddystone Lighthouse During a Storm

I pray the lighthouse will stand firm as waves are crashing overhead, and if the tower's swept away, I have no doubt we'll all be dead... Eddystone Lighthouse, During a Storm - William Daniell 10th May 2016 for Constance's Within A Gilded Frame contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/16/2016 10:54:00 PM

A short and cute one Jack. Hope all is well in your world. love phyl

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/1/2016 7:51:00 AM

I can picture it now. That lone sentinel protecting all. Lovely imagery.

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/29/2016 12:34:00 PM

I feel the isolation and ferocity of the storm in this Jack, I see a win also, and not surprised.' good to spend some time here..)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/23/2016 6:17:00 AM

A rather disturbing thought! Nice poem!!! Terry

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/21/2016 3:29:00 PM

Wow, Jack this is amazing, certainly a picture with ih the frame..

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2016 4:07:00 PM

This might be a short write, Jack, but it is lovely, expressive and effectively projects the image you speak about. ~ All the best. // paul

James Inman

Date: 5/13/2016 12:51:00 PM

Nice short write Jack, to the point.

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/13/2016 11:55:00 AM

Good win Jack, Congratulations...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/13/2016 2:25:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your wonderful win. LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2016 8:07:00 PM

SHORT and not so sweet. JUST how I like them!! Great seeing this new one by you. Oh, you are so good at giving us small potent poems!! Thanks for reading so many of mine tonight,Jack. I miss not seeing you here very often

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/10/2016 4:09:00 PM

Cute and short..Enjoyed reading it..thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 5/10/2016 3:32:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Jack - definitely don't need to see the picture as I can visualise the image in my head - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7