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Since a small child, I have been one with Earth, Green winding tendrils have captured my very heart; I would follow my father with innocent mirth, A love for nature and earth was my start. And into the deep, earthy green we would journey, I still hike forests and feel the connection; Meandering I caress the green, mossy and ferny, I often drop to my knees for a better inspection. Fallen leaves and flora of the forest decay, Feeding the soil and make it strong and fertile; Wildflowers grow reaching and I gather a bouquet, And hidden in the undergrowth is a turtle. All in life depends on the earth and its health, We must all protect what we have for the future; It is more important than possessions or wealth, Into the green I go for tranquility to capture. _________________________ March 8, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/Ebb of Life - Earth Element Copyright Protected, ID 16-765-177-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Elements Part 1: Earth sponsor, Brian Davey Fourth Place

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:36:00 PM
I love the picture above Broken, congratulations on your "Elements Of Earth win." LINDA
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Date: 3/21/2016 2:26:00 PM
Linda, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment !
Date: 3/18/2016 3:36:00 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. What beauty you do place before us. A circle of life for all living things. Born of the earth to finally feed the earth once more. Your work always has such a wonderful flow to it and the words always fit each theme perfectly. I did so enjoy this read. It has to be a seven from me and it definitely goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 3/18/2016 3:48:00 PM
Vlad, thanks for the great comment and the seven and fav, appreciate 1
Date: 3/17/2016 8:40:00 AM
Turned out beautifully, BW, serene, pensive and beautiful.
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Date: 3/17/2016 5:41:00 PM
James, thanks so much for visiting with the lovely comment ~
Date: 3/17/2016 8:25:00 AM
Congrats Constance! A very natural flow!
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Date: 3/17/2016 5:45:00 PM
Balveen, thanks so much for visiting with the congrats !
Date: 3/16/2016 11:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings :)
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:07:00 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congrats !
Date: 3/16/2016 11:02:00 PM
Brilliant take on theme n wonderful win Broken.... big congrats!
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:24:00 AM
Upma, thanks for visiting with the brilliant, wonderful and congrats !
Date: 3/16/2016 9:45:00 PM
BW, wonderful poem and great take on the contest.. congrats on your placement in the contest!! -luloo :)
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:25:00 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the wonderful and the congrats :)
Date: 3/16/2016 9:17:00 PM
Congrats on the Win of the Earth...Well done Wings...^WW^
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:25:00 AM
Winged, thanks for the congrats and the compliment !
Date: 3/16/2016 7:42:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserving poem and thank you for entering
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:30:00 AM
Brian, thanks for a great theme and for my wonderful placement, I am honored !
Date: 3/8/2016 6:39:00 PM
I will be back!!!! :-)
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Date: 3/8/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thanks Walter ...
Date: 3/8/2016 2:18:00 PM
I like it so far :-)
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Date: 3/8/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Eve . . .
Date: 3/8/2016 11:53:00 AM
Nicely penned Constance, you've written this really well, liked it!
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:14:00 PM
Gordon, thanks for visiting with the compliment, it is not quite finished but I like where it is going ...
Date: 3/8/2016 11:21:00 AM
This is so lovely, dear BW!! I was wondering.. For your Second Chance contest, could we enter a poem that got a (low) placement in one contest and an NA in another? :)
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:31:00 AM
Sneha, thanks for visiting with the lovely and yes is the answer to your question. ..
Date: 3/8/2016 10:45:00 AM
Still working on my comment, I'll be back later, haha.
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Date: 3/17/2016 2:42:00 AM
James, lol, so funny ~

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