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Below is the poem entitled EARLY SNOW which was written by poet Victoria Oliver. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Snow fell early this winter
Before the earth was ready.
Uprooted oak trees fell, and
Birch trees are dying.

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  1. Date: 6/27/2012 9:52:00 AM
    Well formed dodoitsu, and great natural images. Like this. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 3:49:00 PM
    Victoria, I think we can use a little snow here in Texas,,, our trees die without the snow... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD

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    Date: 6/24/2012 6:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm in CT. That storm hit on Halloween - 12 inches, and we never got anymore snow the rest of the winter. The trees just literally fell over, roots and all. We actually have a drought now, and threats of wildfires. That's not supposed to happen in New England! My son and his wife are in Austin. I'm originally from San Antonio & Fredericksburg. Very familiar with TX.
  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:58:00 AM
    Awesome Write!

    Oliver Avatar Victoria Oliver
    Date: 6/24/2012 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I saw you commented on a couple of my poems... thank you! I'm just starting to write in the Japanese formats, and it's really nice to get some positive reinforcement. Thanks!