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Eager Emma Elephant

Emma Elephant was desperate to become a mum And have a baby elephant growing in her tum Unfortunately poor Emma didn’t have a mate In fact she had never ever even been on a date So she put on her best dress and went to a dance Had her heart set on a little romance Out of the corner of her eye she spied the perfect man She tried to get his attention by wafting her feather fan He was handsome big and strong With an enormous trunk it was very very long Their eyes met across the crowded dance floor They entwined trunks, Emma couldn’t wish for more Now Emma and her man are husband and wife She’s expecting her baby and has a perfect life. So the moral of the story is don’t sit back and wait Grab each opportunity don’t leave it down to fate Jan Allison 18th August 2014

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Peter Dome

Date: 8/19/2014 6:52:00 PM

I certainly know who's around my corner. Big Gia the toilet cleaner. She gave me the eyes once.I put it in my pocket and forgot it. boy did it smell. I've given up. but I could make an exception. they are either married or over the other side of the pond. just my luck. take care thanx Pete.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 7:06:00 PM

Positive vibes ~~~~~ in the words of kate Bush... Dont Give UP! hugs jan xxx

Peter Dome

Date: 8/19/2014 6:29:00 PM

Wise words Jan I've left it too late boo hoo. A great story fun write. your very good at these. love your humour. best wishes/ Pete.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 6:34:00 PM

It is never too late Peter - you never know who is around the corner my friend:-) positive vibes please ~~~~ Hugs jan xxxx

James Fraser

Date: 8/19/2014 4:57:00 PM

Love the double meaning Jan, again it's what makes a writer. Me, this angle of writing I so enjoy. Quite a few of my poems use this pattern of thought, with music overtones amidst. Keep em coming - James :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/19/2014 5:00:00 PM

would still love to include this in a kids books James - the parents would enjoy the innuendo Lol Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 8/18/2014 8:44:00 AM

Okay, Jan. First I'm thinking kiddie story, but Mum would have trouble explaining the trunk thing, me thinks, so I will just tell you how much I enjoyed it ;) Thanks Jan. Jim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:47:00 AM

Who says kid's books are just for the kids LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/18/2014 8:44:00 AM

LOL okies now make it a kids picture book! YES Light & Love

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:47:00 AM

I have about 7 kids stories poems Debbie - when my life is less traumatic with my parents i will pursue my dream but now is not the right time:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/18/2014 8:06:00 AM

Lol...minds out of the gutters ladies....lol.....awesome animal story Jan....I barely got past the trunk it was so enormous..... Hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 8:08:00 AM

.... and its written to be a kids story :-( mmmmmm slap on wrists for me today I guess :-) hugs Jan xxxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/18/2014 7:46:00 AM

What a cute story, unfortunatly my mind got stuck on the elephants ..trunk.. it is one of those kind of days! I do so love your animal poems sweetie, you are awesome :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/18/2014 7:47:00 AM

LOL I thought you would get the innuendo! As soon as I saw I had a comment I knew it would be from you my lovely friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx