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Dying in my sleep

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Dying in my sleep

my life starts to fade to black
i struggle as i lose my breath
and when im gone i won't come back
i scream until theres nothing left

then i start to slowly die
6ft under in the ground
i scream but no one hears my cry
i scream but no one hears a sound

im buried under fear and guilt 
im buried under dirt and tears
my scarred arms, so pale and thin
ive waited for this pain for years.

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  1. Date: 2/14/2010 4:13:00 PM
    Odd to want pain? There are nicer ways to feel being alive. Thought provoking verse. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 6:55:00 AM
    Very well constructed and rhymed... this is Plath conventionally written... stark and uncompromising. BRAVO Catia! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 1/5/2009 10:59:00 AM
    I know how you feel. This speaks to me! Well done!

  1. Date: 12/10/2008 10:20:00 AM
    My cell # is: 1-513-560-1320

  1. Date: 11/20/2008 10:21:00 AM
    Very poignant, welcome to poetry soup...Raul

  1. Date: 11/19/2008 7:03:00 AM
    Welcome to PoetrySoup. Hope you will continue with your writing and that you share it with the world. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/17/2008 10:56:00 AM
    Hey you should call me my phone number is 5134940672

  1. Date: 11/14/2008 11:34:00 AM
    Yeah I was the one you helped write the poem with and the one with the red hair Alex. . . Read Emotional It's the one we wrote together. . . .

  1. Date: 11/6/2008 7:19:00 AM
    wow this is really deep :) i like it.

  1. Date: 11/5/2008 1:32:00 PM
    Oh Catia, You have a very creative imagination and one I am quickly getting into and admire. Please keep your pens ink flowing so your amazing words of poetry keeps growing... MPK