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Some places exist which folks need to clean, like deep in a closet or under a bed. Such spots get ignored because they’re unseen. Those in plain view get attention instead! Some children exist we choose to ignore, for they are not ours. They live out of sight. Unwanted, unloved, and rarely cared for; some rich, others poor - they share the same plight. Their life is a darkness where they’ve been thrown. They are gathering dust; no voice have they. Their sorrows are only to God fully known - these dust bunnies, growing more filthy each day. They are the future, and in a short time they will have become society’s grime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/19/2017 6:06:00 PM
congrats on your win :), you say you got the turtle. I love turtle :)
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Date: 8/12/2015 9:53:00 AM
Touched by your dust bunnies, Andrea. Our children can have a good future if they want to, but many of these will never experience life as we know it. ` Congrats on your win. ~ paul
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:14:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea! Heartfelt emotions truly expressed, great work!
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Date: 8/12/2015 2:10:00 AM
Andrea, you pulled at my heart strings with this one. It saddens me to know that some where in the world a child is being ignored or forgotten. This write is reality. Great thought provoking piece. Congrats on your win:-)Alexis 7
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:59:00 AM
Nice Andrea, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:20:00 AM
Hello, Andrea.... LOL, that any poem 32 was mine... I was just being lazy. Got my @$$ up today, glad to see you on the winning list... By the way, I remeber this poem well. LOL, who writes about Dust Bunnie, but Andrea & Carol.... LOL, in which is very XOOL!!! Anyways, :) Congratulations on your wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Stop by my latest blog "BE MINDFUL WHEN YOU WRITE" if you'd like or have time. Once again, thank you. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/12/2015 1:26:00 AM
maybe you should remove the bottom note, lol,,, I give everyone HM's or NA's until i post the winning list.
Date: 4/27/2015 1:17:00 PM
Everyone deserves to be feed and cared for in this world. Last one now time for lunch. Always a pleasure to read your fine poetry. love phyl
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Date: 4/18/2015 6:00:00 PM
Andrea, sorry your poem did not make the any poem # 32. Glad you got another chance, from another sponsor who loves and understands dust bunnies. Love Linda
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Date: 4/18/2015 1:25:00 AM
No matter who they are, everyone is still human and deserves to be cared for... Your poem inspires and touches the heart. Very nicely done, Andrea! It does deserve to be on the winner's list. Congrats to you, as well!
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:08:00 PM
Congrats Andrea:)
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Date: 4/15/2015 3:55:00 PM
When I saw the title I thought this was going to be a funny poem...Boy was I ever wrong! GREAT analogy which is loaded with wisdom and insight Andrea...N/A? I beg to differ...
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:17:00 PM
By the way, I am showing an N/A in the same contest that you entered as well as contest #31... Also an honorable mention in ANOTHER and I don't think the winners have been posted yet...This has happened to me quite a few times. I show an N/A and then presto! I find that I have placed...
Date: 4/15/2015 8:45:00 AM
Andrea, glad to see your excellent poem made the podium this time around. Congratulations! Sandra
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:44:00 AM
Glad to see this one on the list Andrea...Congrats on the win!
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Date: 4/15/2015 4:43:00 AM
I loved this first time round Andrea congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/15/2015 1:57:00 AM
Burned twice, but the pain is now over. Congrats Andrea and thank you for participating. Hugs, Rob.
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Date: 3/25/2015 1:34:00 PM
Dust Bunnies, cool title and a term that I'd not heard before. Coll message in your words Andrea, James :)
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Date: 3/18/2015 1:03:00 AM
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Date: 3/4/2015 8:28:00 PM
Wow, a dark look at reality you have expressed in this piece Andrea. Our children are our future and we need to care for all of them. Great poem!
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Date: 3/1/2015 11:40:00 PM
A condemnation on the failure of society to care for our most valuable asset, children. You have produced a powerful sonnet under the guise of an allegory. It was not what i expected at all from the title yet once read the title fits the poem like a glove. True artistry, and I am sure it is a winner in the competition. love Shane xxx
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Date: 3/1/2015 9:49:00 PM
o dust bunnies clever write Andie. Love
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:33:00 PM
Andrea, such a wonderful allegory and very creative with a powerful message! GL in the contest. Andrea
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Date: 3/1/2015 6:27:00 PM
A creative and whimsical write Andrea.. I enjoyed the read! A 7..
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:35:00 AM
Andrea, good one, giving dust a personality as only you could do, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my spring poem ...
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Date: 2/28/2015 9:06:00 PM
Sad but true...very nicely penned Andrea
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Date: 2/28/2015 7:53:00 PM
Much anguish here . . . seeing the cycle but feeling helpless to make changes . . . but awareness is a beginning . . . not more money, more programs, more stuff . . . but love and attention. Well done my dearest friend. . . deep is your love for children which is part of your calling each day!! Much love and light. 7
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