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Dusk Till Dawn

I travel to & from work at dusk & dawn. From womb to cage, then back again. I have grown grey, not quite day. Invisible, too tired to be seen. Another citizen of in-between.

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Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/13/2011 6:11:00 AM

Interesting write; a poem for everyman, almost.

Skat A

Date: 3/6/2010 5:17:00 AM

I do relate . A great poem indeed. I have enjoyed reading . I also would love to thank you for reading my poems. By the way ''s.k.a.t.'' is my signoff on any poem..It is short for --silly kitty attitude toytry poetry.... I do enjoy fun with my work. THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR COMMENT....

Marty Owens

Date: 1/24/2010 1:26:00 PM

Very thought provoking...enjoyed...Marty

The Melody Sings

Date: 1/22/2010 11:53:00 AM

I like it very very good. Oh and thanks for all your comments. you have Soup Mail!

Jay Loveless

Date: 1/22/2010 10:31:00 AM

Another citizen of in-between...i like that. many of us are. xo R.e.c.k

Date: 1/21/2010 11:49:00 AM

Thought provoking poem. I think most will relate to your words as we all have our tough times. I really like the last line. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen