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Dusk Falls Softly

Dusk slowly falls across the land spooky shadows begin appearing. Trees sway seeming to walk waving their branches in time. Hoots of owls on the prowl carry far into the night. Ghostly figures slip by some, creatures of the night. Others look much more sinister yet soon fade out of sight. Deer stealthy go to drink and the pale moon mirrors them. Their eyes shining bright in the reflective light. The night darkens and the moon beams down. Stars caught dance in her light as peace covers the land. Slowly the mystic of night passes and dawn creeps across the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/16/2015 7:54:00 AM
My friend, you painted that landscape so very well. From my many overnight camping ventures, I too have seen that view! A7
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Date: 9/19/2015 11:58:00 AM
You have painted a picture with words that tantalize, tease and catapult the reader into a fantasy that lasts from dusk to dawn. Emile.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/20/2015 8:41:00 AM
ty Emile good to see you hugs
Date: 9/19/2015 7:52:00 AM
I always feel drawn to the kind of scene you describe--that is, scenes rich in the sights and sounds of nature as they might have been right at the dawn of time.
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Date: 9/20/2015 8:43:00 AM
ty Agona nature is special hugs
Date: 9/18/2015 1:04:00 PM
Shadow, this poem so wonderfully expresses the fears of darkness I felt in my youth with chilling imagery! 7
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Date: 9/18/2015 3:00:00 PM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 9/13/2015 4:32:00 AM
you captured the mystery of the night with nature and its creatures, shadow... fine one!..huggs
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Date: 9/18/2015 3:00:00 PM
ty Nette hugs
Date: 9/12/2015 6:40:00 PM
Such vivid imagery Shadow I can picture this so clearly in my minds eye:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2015 2:59:00 PM
ty Jan hugs

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