Dusk

A beginning and an end Dusk a gentle sigh Goodbye to this day's wonder Soon the night birds cry Velvet cloak is drawn The moon her secrets keeping Rest until the coming dawn...... Barbara Gorelick 9/28/12 "Wonder of Dusk" a Seguidilla contest.

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Lee Ramage

Date: 10/9/2012 7:59:00 PM

beautiful poem, I really enjoyed this lulling poem. Thank you for sharing. Lee

Kash Poet

Date: 10/9/2012 12:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win Barbara.Beautiful verse.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2012 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 9/29/2012 12:53:00 PM

lovely indeed, Barbara - especially love the last line. Congrats on your wins : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2012 12:29:00 PM

Ahhh!!Romantic and exquisite beautiful contest entry..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/29/2012 12:10:00 PM

Love this one, dear Barbara! Much luck... hugs, Jack xox

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/29/2012 6:34:00 AM

Beautiful images... good luck in the contest... Terry

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/28/2012 3:57:00 PM

this creates a lovely and very dusk-like mood. nice one!