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Duringmythoughts

I was looking at the sky today; the clouds didn't say much the embarrassed sun hid behind the clouds. My friends were all flying today but they floated away. Underneath this lantern that grass grew in patterns, the clouds were no help they didn't give me an answer. Maybe it was a shadow of sorts or the lawn had cancer. Ever have one of those days when you can't trust your senses? It's like the world told a secret but to you it wasn't mentioned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/22/2013 6:49:00 AM
I like the last two lines especially. And, the idea that one can't trust one's senses. I believe most writers/poets have many of these moments....what do you think?
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Date: 8/8/2013 7:27:00 AM
Yeah, it's like everyone else is with the program and I'm standing motionless. LOL!! I definitely know that feeling. A cool write!...Milt
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