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Dumb Animals

In the midst of all the turmoil in the world A simple reconnect with the past Can make the crap that we constantly hear Seems so unimportant real fast So unimportant in the overall scheme The only thing that matters is love With everything else we're forced to endure Love's bigger than all else above Love of nature where creatures abound We're just part of the overall scene Soon we'll realize as intelligent as we are Must be missing a certain gene A gene these so called dumb animals possess Which allows them to coexist There's a lot these dumb animals can teach us Wouldn't that be a crazy twist So I ask you, who are the real dumb animals It's us, it's definitely us humans Maybe one day we'll get as smart as these animals And be more than intelligent cavemen © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 9/12/2013 11:01:00 PM
    well said, Jack. Wise and thoughtful words.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/13/2013 5:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your comments are much appreciated dear Andrea! Big hugs xoxoxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Another thought-provoking message. Animals are a real jewel. I agree with you entirely! Always, Laura

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Methinks us humans could be classified as the dumb animals! Whatcha think? Love Jack xoxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:55:00 AM
    The dumb animals are up in arms at being called dumb! Boy have you started something around here. No! Dragon! That does not include you... There's another name for you... LOL... You tell me, Silly Dragon!... Still doesn't get it... Oh Well! and outside of our neat little world... the coexisting part... usually means someone's going to be lunch... Gee Jack... Coffee needed, MUCH?... LOL... Having fun with you. What animal are you eating for lunch? Dragon says... NOT DRAGON! You got him worried!

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Give them my humblest apologies Carol... I am so sorry if I hurt their feelings. I DON'T BELIEVE I'M TALKING LIKE THEY'RE REAL!!! YIKES xoxox
  1. Date: 9/12/2013 6:25:00 AM
    So true, maybe someday. I feel so naked without that gene. Fun poem.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 9/12/2013 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We are all naked without that gene! This "intelligent caveman" here signing off! Cheers!