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                                        last call made —
                                        winter moonlight
                                        on an empty bottle




                                        

Imnotte Llingu



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  1. Date: 7/17/2015 7:46:00 PM
    Hey Ruben, I love your Drunken Moon.. Congrats on your win in this clever contest!

  1. Date: 7/9/2015 1:42:00 PM
    Great write, Ruben. Gongrats on your win!

  1. Date: 7/9/2015 12:37:00 AM
    Congrats on awesome win Ruben!

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 6:30:00 PM
    Cheers, not that is a creative one, nicely done :)

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 6:21:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 10:41:00 AM
    Congrats on this lovely haiku, Ruben, and on your podium finish! #7 // paul

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 9:08:00 AM
    Very unique modern haiku Ruben...congratulations on your fine second place.

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 8:16:00 AM
    This is really good, congrats!

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 7:30:00 AM
    Beautiful, well done on your win.

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 6:56:00 AM
    ...a cold and empty fate Ruben and I read a little double meaning into the first line... Well Done Ruben

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 4:56:00 AM
    This is a very moving haiku Ruben. Big congrats on your well deserved win!

  1. Date: 7/8/2015 2:27:00 AM
    great work - congrats Ruben:-) hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 11:37:00 PM
    wow, Ruben, I am very glad to finally get to see that you did one of these. it's exceptionally good!!

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 11:30:00 PM
    Great work, Ruben, I can almost hear the chairs being turned upside down and put on the tables. Regards, Viv

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 11:07:00 PM
    Beautiful congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 10:23:00 PM
    WOW, Imnotte Llingu, on the bottom boggles my mind. Anyways, without a second thought this was amazing. The last call and empty bottle gave me exactly what I was looking for. ThanXs SK

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 6:35:00 PM
    You chose very well your personal favorite, Ruben. Congrats to you. How are you?

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 9:25:00 AM
    one of my favorite on this list of winners!! the mood is amazing!!! (I would place high!!)

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:35:00 AM
    Hi congratulations, great haiku Ex, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 6:27:00 PM
    congrats!

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