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Below is the poem entitled Drowning which was written by poet Justin Robbins. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Unthinkable reality coming to life,
Terms of conditions in overwhelming strife.
A strangled cry of pain and grief,
No one knows because they don’t believe.
Crawling on both knees, to weak to walk,
While evil laughs and continues to stalk.
My mind my heart all have drained,
A blackened tar leaves them stained.
Alone and forsaken, my self-made hell,
I drown so slowly in life's well.

Copyright © Justin Robbins

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  1. Date: 3/11/2011 8:01:00 PM
    I am a fan of yours must be a wonderful person with such wonderful just feels like a joke, to admire what you have written , though i feel like you are in such a deep pain, but i still have to admire you.....Life is very diplomatic.....but plz, overcome your pain!

  1. Date: 3/11/2011 5:55:00 PM
    Dude. I Feel like I wrote this! I mean that in a good way. Man. Your head must be as messed up as mine. REEEAL GOOOOD! Much Props! ~JS