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Drops

Drop Drop Patter Patter patter Pattering pattering rain You forgot to bring an umbrella But as you stand in the gentle rain You soon forget, too You ever needed one An outstretched hand catches but a few You turn your face to the sky to better feel more Water beads flying by A tangible view of a different perspective In the company of the sound of the drops Life is at a standstill here The greyness of the world to the eye Somehow is so beautiful In the rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/24/2014 6:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem Rainau ! Loved the write ,, the last stanza especially ,, congrats on win !
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Date: 5/24/2014 12:38:00 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena
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Date: 5/23/2014 10:21:00 AM
Rainau, congratulations... I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
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Date: 5/19/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 5/18/2014 10:12:00 AM
I enjoyed the poem.
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