Drizzle

. raindrops pitter patter click clack first light then fast mist rises from drives and roadways drizzle

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 8:55:00 PM

Love the different sounds in this one. Great ending line.

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/7/2012 8:46:00 PM

Nice picture painted by your use of this form. Very visual and striking! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/7/2012 3:32:00 AM

such a simple aspect of the morning, yet put in to your poem, it is wonderland. Sara, you asked me about Moor, i'll try be brief, it is highland above the valleys, usually named, like Rombald's Moor, which is our Moor here, in Wharfedale where i live, In fact when i started to read some of your poems, i thought you were a local lass from here in Yorkshire. love what you do, love Harry

Jack Horne

Date: 8/6/2012 9:29:00 AM

love this imaginative and clever write, Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/6/2012 1:30:00 AM

good tonality and poetic impact, sara... well done!..:) huggs

Kash Poet

Date: 8/5/2012 10:24:00 PM

Lovely ....just lovely Cinquin here Sara!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/5/2012 7:16:00 PM

Wonderful images Sara. Such a great piece of poetry. Hugs n luv Michael

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/5/2012 7:15:00 PM

This is a fabulous Cinquain my friend! I love a good drizzle in the morning, right about the time the sun rises! Such beauty in your awesome words here Sara! Great Work!!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/5/2012 7:14:00 PM

I can picture this mist from the roads, especially on hot afternoons. great description.