Driving

Driving in my blue car. Sunny day, top is down. Blue skies above me. The road a blue ribbon. Where will the wind blow me? Music is turned up loud. Sail ahead on a cloud.

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Viv Wigley

Date: 8/29/2016 7:46:00 PM

Deserted Irish country lanes, and you go and lose your car? I'll send you another pic, or you can send me your current one, Jean x

Jean Murray
Date: 8/30/2016 1:40:00 AM

If you could only see me here typing with two fingers Viv, you would have an inkling of how computer illiterate I am. Almost as bas as my spellling skills. OK....let's do it again !!

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2016 11:32:00 AM

This is lively and lovely as it is, Jean! It might not be a Pleiades, but an enjoyable poem all the same! ~ Regards // paul

Jean Murray
Date: 8/29/2016 4:06:00 PM

Thank you for saying so Paul. I kinda like it myself.

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/29/2016 6:45:00 AM

I assume it's the car top that is down, jean, and you're not getting an even tan. Sounds like a lovely way to spend a sunny day, westbound on Cluain Ard with a bit of Bruce Springsteen on the auld Blaupunkt Cassette. Oh, hang on, that's me.... Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 8/29/2016 3:06:00 PM

After all that compressing Viv.....Check out my new bubble car! I've lost the new one I downloaded.

Jean Murray
Date: 8/29/2016 7:17:00 AM

Viv I have just realised.....although there are 6 syllables per line, only the first one starts with D. So, it's back to the drawing board for me!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2016 4:19:00 AM

- Sounds delicious..... with wind in hair - Sail ahead ..... lovely, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 8/29/2016 6:00:00 AM

It's one of my favourite thing to do Anne-Lise. Especially here in Ireland. Especially on narrow minor roads, or back roads as we call them.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2016 4:09:00 AM

Sounds like a perfect day Jean - love the ribbon road - lovely descriptive write my friend:-) hugs Jan xx7

Jean Murray
Date: 8/29/2016 5:58:00 AM

Thank you Jan. I will post a photo of me in mine after work.