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Drinking Wisdom

I went to the wilderness By following her voice I drank from her wisdom A cup chosen by choice Preconception abandoned I went with a clean mind Predudices, experiences Often make me blind Love the replacement In a World wracked with pain Hate is often chosen Over and over again A few make a difference Love spreads flavor like salt If some of us begin helping It won't matter who's at fault

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/12/2013 6:07:00 PM
Oh wow. I have to say I am loving this site. I appreciate genuine feelings and graceful thoughts.. thank you sir. nice to meet you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/12/2013 6:46:00 PM
Thanks Kimmy, nice to make your Aquaintance.
Date: 1/10/2013 7:15:00 AM
Well stated Richard! I like the idea of drinking in wisdom. Wisdom and Knowledge in action is needed to combat the ills that ail the world. The idea of collective responsibility resonates well with wanting to heal the world. Nice job!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/10/2013 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Vicky, coming from a young woman I see as wise I feel honored by your words.
Date: 1/9/2013 8:56:00 PM
so much wisdom in such wisdom.If our only words are hurtful silence is golden.
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Date: 1/8/2013 4:07:00 PM
Wisdom of ages packed here. Loved it. Thanks for sharing .... Mehnaz
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 4:42:00 PM
Thanks Mehnaz
Date: 1/8/2013 10:29:00 AM
Wolves hunt in packs, lions hunt in prides.if we''re going to survive we need to push our differences aside.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 4:41:00 PM
Very true John.
Date: 1/8/2013 9:37:00 AM
Rick, this is a wonderful poem, profound and full of wisdom, if each person just tried the world would be a much better place, well done, Constance
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 9:44:00 AM
Thanks Contstance. How are you theses days?
Date: 1/8/2013 8:58:00 AM
"Love spreads flavor like salt", loved this verse, salt is the key of taste, without salt all food end in plain, as same as life without love ~> plain :D
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