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Drifting

The feel of the warm sun's ray as it wraps it's arms around Greeting the day with endless delight the heart felt light and airy as it's spirit flew into the amber sun It's fire burns a flickering flame As time lazily drifts away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/20/2015 11:22:00 PM
aha. I have reached the point where I left off!!! Feels good to have caught up with your marvelous poetry!!
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Date: 3/20/2015 11:16:00 PM
GREAT imagery here. As time lazily drifts away. Love that line.
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:13:00 PM
Wonderful, reminds me of summer vacations, a good thought to have now that winter is haunting us!!!
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:34:00 AM
- Oh... a lovely poem dear Phyllis! - Missing the summer sun when I read this :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/18/2014 11:26:00 PM
This poem makes me want to drift away while bathing under the Hawaiian sun. A lovely poem Phyllis!
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Date: 11/18/2014 12:07:00 AM
A great winter Phyllis when Sun hugs us as parents. Very sweet indeed!Love. Take careXXXXX rajat
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Date: 11/17/2014 3:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem. It feels light and day dreamy. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:00:00 PM
I like yours better! The third line popped for me!! All the best!
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