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dreams to unravel

~~ and I close my eyes drifting and floating, in mist reality is crumbling my thoughts pirouette tumbling and falling, I plunge spinning, whirling and tangled I plummet in dream in darkness, I drop, dizzy surreal and uncharted unknown secret realm where dreams collide, crash and slip and soon all is lost and vanished ~~ February 21, 2013 Choka x 2

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 11:10:00 AM
    An Excellent write, Constance~ Well done~A.O

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Constance Time space and matter shifting ripping the cloak off awareness, going beyond the mind. Thank You it was wonderful ride.

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:27:00 AM
    Very beautiful. I loved it. Thanks for sharing and may God bless you always....... Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:17:00 AM
    I recognize your style for its beauty Constance

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:44:00 AM
    deeply enjoyed, nice work as always...

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:08:00 AM
    An awesome write Constance. So nice to hear from you. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:00:00 AM
    wonderful write

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:48:00 PM
    enjoyed reading your beautiful words tonight, my friend. Hope you are well and keeping warm x

  1. Date: 2/22/2013 1:08:00 AM
    I think I have had a few dreams like that, Constance. It's good to see a poem of yours here tonight. You do very well in this choka form. A SEVEN for you.

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 4:43:00 PM
    You description is tremendous, an amazing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully beautiful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, surely delightful to read, Great Work!!