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Dreams Gone All Wrong

Bruised and battered she lies on a pillow wet with tears…… Trying to think What is it she has done to deserve this?? From her child hood a woman dreams of a man in her life…… A prince charming Who will love her, protect her and be there for her….. Make her feel like a queen…. Not In her wildest dreams had she ever thought that her dreams would turn into a nightmare….. Little had she thought That her love would give her the scare….. Hitting her for every little glitch Even for speaking her mind Treating her like a commodity, a thing, an emotionless being…. In a suffocating relationship she lingers on…. Can’t even show her wounds to any one…… I wonder why Women tolerate such men?? Nothing is more important than self respect Not even a COWARD husband…….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/15/2012 11:03:00 PM
Irfana,, Congratulations in Debbie's " Let's Get Serious " awesome contest. ~ :-) always a pleasure in reading all winners when I get the chance. super xox's from~ PD
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:03:00 PM
SO TRUE, and you said it so well. Congrats on your well deserved win, Irfana.
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Date: 9/11/2012 4:04:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...:)))
Date: 9/10/2012 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in this contest "Let's Get Serious" Irfana. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/11/2012 4:05:00 AM
Thanks Carol....
Date: 9/9/2012 2:36:00 PM
Congrad's on your Serious verse winning. This is an important issue to draw attention too. Light & Love
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Date: 9/9/2012 3:20:00 PM
Yes,Debbie...it is an important issue and women everywhere whether its in west or east, suffer from domestic violence...but its we who have to find the courage to say no...Thanks...:)
Date: 9/9/2012 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your Hm Irfana xx
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Date: 9/9/2012 3:18:00 PM
thanks Mandy,,,:)
Date: 9/8/2012 9:26:00 PM
Well said. Congratulations on your HM. Well done Lee
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 9/9/2012 3:21:00 AM
Thanks...:))
Date: 9/8/2012 6:20:00 PM
There seems to be so much of this in the world. Women unite. You don't have to be battered. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 9/9/2012 3:20:00 AM
yes,we have to unite and fight against such atrocities Joyce....thanks..:)))

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