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Dreaming On a Diet

Raspberries Young, tender and succulent Smothered in cream Yellow fluffy omelets Garnished with herbs Eve's pudding bathing in custard - temptingly - Mushroom risotto -a gourmet delight - Served with green salad plus chips and icecream! A glass of white wine - Pinot Grigio slightly chilled - decadence - Madness sets in - slowly I imagine how happy I'll be when I'm slim A young flirty lover With lips made of chocolate Just waiting for kissing Delicious and sweet Courting my taste buds - disgracefully -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2016 1:24:00 PM
Liz, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2016 10:50:00 AM
Linda - thanks a million - I haven't been writing much so your lovely comment will be the incentive to return! Liz
Date: 1/18/2012 9:15:00 PM
oooh mama mia. YUMMY poem. MY KIND of dream. Big fave on this one!!!
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:52:00 AM
Liz, I've actually had dreams like this when dieting. I think the brain is trying to tempt us in our sleep. Yummy dishes await in your poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2011 10:51:00 AM
Diet?? what does that word mean?! Wow, this made my tummy grumble! Smiles as I read this delicious write!! "lips made of chocolate" -- oh that is just bliss~ enjoyed this very much, Liz :) *burp*
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