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Dreaming In Wrenna

still the season in texas where drifting in the hammock leads you to a different kind of heat where hazy lazy things are hard to define dreaming in Wrenna of strawberries big as cars where you can go in side eat your way out, of slides that wind and curve for days, of bluebirds and their lovely vocal accompaniment of the whole beautiful scene

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Date: 9/8/2010 7:41:00 PM
Cool image of that hammock and dreaming in Wrenna!
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:08:00 PM
I like how you split the stanzas having the last line connect to the first line of the next. Great line breaks. "hammock leads you to // a different kind of" that was a good way of taking the reader into the dream without saying "dream". Nice one.
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:55:00 PM
Beautiful imagery describing from ' hazy lazy things are hard to define to dreaming in Wrenna of strawberries big as cars' quite a sweet poem my friend. And thanks for your precious comments. Love and best wishes....Ravindra......kristi hayner
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Date: 9/5/2010 2:02:00 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Keep on writing! Karen
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