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Dreaming In Tanka Form

with starry-eyed grasp a pen desiring its flow romantic musings the essence of wishing words showing love’s endearing glow All Rights Reserved by Debra Squyres 3/10/13 (tanka)

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Date: 3/29/2013 4:25:00 PM
how lovely this one is. Sorry I missed it until now! Thanks for my placement in your contest. I love nursery rhymes and that was a very interesting contest to me.
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Date: 3/12/2013 12:49:00 AM
That's a true poem in its essence and a real tanka in view of the feelings it evokes! I adore tankas and haikus. I have posted some, too
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Date: 3/11/2013 5:50:00 PM
a dream about writing? i guess i have thoes too.
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Debra Squyres
Date: 3/12/2013 1:59:00 PM
tanka does not usually have titles so I'm told, but since Poetry soup requires one, it's the best I could come up with.
Date: 3/10/2013 12:55:00 PM
This is a truly brilliant write my friend! You have pleased me to no end with creating this delightful Tanka, I love this form! Such great romanticism within this confines of this tremendous poem! Quite the wonderful piece, Awesome Work!!
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Date: 3/10/2013 11:17:00 AM
Gorgeous! - Continue to dream in Tanka Form!! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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