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Dreaming An Electric Reality

Late at night hearts pounding heads in the stars Three young me head over to the local diner Their bodies are in one place but their souls are somewhere else The cloak of night surrounds them As they journey to their destination Laughing out loud They light up the darkness In this Unreal City the taste of unreality may be just what is needed Auto lights are reflected on the asphalt The asphalt homeland where these youths are living out their fantasies and enjoying laughter The laughter of youth

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/17/2014 11:33:00 AM
Very nice poem of present day's youth life in general but few exception is there. Educational indeed. Loved always, my poet friend, bl
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Date: 3/16/2014 6:55:00 AM
Unreality is a much enjoyable period for the young till reality knocks at the door of advancing age! A very captivating and thought provoking poem my dear friend Matthew! Thank you!
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Date: 3/16/2014 6:16:00 AM
Very descriptive of city life..Well at least from what I see on TV..Enjoyed reading your creativity this morning.Have a great Sunday..I have been in city parks a few times in my life and they can be very nice a good way to enjoy nature..Thanks for visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/16/2014 2:27:00 AM
Hello, Matt... enjoyable ending, you are a joy, thank you for always thinking of me, xox~ Linda
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this younger write tonight Matthew, I specially enjoyed the for me anyway very descriptive end lines..'
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:30:00 PM
I always enjoy your poetry and this pensive piece is exceptional. Mahalo
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Date: 3/14/2014 12:25:00 AM
You only get to enjoy youth once. When it's gone, it's gone for good. Good write, Matthew.
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