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Dreaming

I though about you today. I dreamt of You last night. I saw you face in a distant place where Everything was right. I found that I still know you Still recognize your face Even across the blurry voids Of time and frozen space. I only see you in my dreams. I only hear your voice when I'm fast asleep. Are you a just a voice inside my head? Guilt over words I left unsaid? Cause when I wake up its all gone Like smoke upon the wind

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:54:00 PM

Brendon Reddings, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2016 10:30:00 AM

Brendon,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@