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Dreamed To Be An Eagle

A dream I had last night So vivid and so true, An Eagle I was, flying Over places I knew My wings had stretched wide To lift me to the sky To view beauty from above As far as could see, my eye I soared over mountains And valleys of green Such splendor and such beauty My soul had never seen Uninterruptedly for hours Through the air I just flew Enjoying every second Till the dawn near drew Then I opened my eyes And saw human still to be Saddened my heart I found For wasn’t as the Eagle free!* © Demetrios Trifiatis 17 May 2016 *I am writing on birds today for a special project! Will return to my usual style.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2016 3:30:00 PM

that would be ONE awesome dream to have. I miss my flying dreams of the past. And to be an eagle. Wow!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/18/2016 6:15:00 PM

I love it when I dream flying! Such a feeling! Who knows next life will be my choice to be an eagle! Haha! Thank you dearest, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/17/2016 7:56:00 AM

- A delightful dream, dear Demetrios - Beautiful poems, a 7 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/17/2016 8:07:00 AM

Yes, yes, this is marvelous! How many times was I dreaming of flying when as a child was climbing the mountains of my village called "EAGLE". Thank you dearest, Anne-Lise for your visit and generosity. Hugs!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/17/2016 2:42:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, What a beautiful dream. It was such a lovely flight with amazing imagery. That would be something to be as free as the eagle in this well written piece. An undeniable 7- Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/17/2016 7:14:00 AM

I always marveled the Eagle. The village I was born bears is named after the bird: Eagle! Thank you for liking it dear, Alexis!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/17/2016 2:22:00 AM

It's good to mix it up Demetrios. I enjoyed flying with you.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/17/2016 7:16:00 AM

I think you are right my friend, Richard but at my age is better to pass messages that might make someone think for I have no time to write long poems, on the other hand there are so many much better poets than me that my contribution is not missed! Thank you!

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/17/2016 2:01:00 AM

`SWEET `7...flying dreams are the best and I do not think you should go back to any "usual style"...cause I really dig this, my wise friend of hidden talents!!This is such a beautiful quatrain that stirs up such awesome imagery of a minute in a Eagle's adventures, peaceful day!!Bravo, Bravo!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/17/2016 7:18:00 AM

Mille grazie, Jill! I try to contribute the way I am able to, dear friend. Thank you so much for your generosity and your sweet comment! Thank you!

John Fleming

Date: 5/17/2016 1:46:00 AM

Nicely conceived idea, Demetrios - I enjoyed the flight! My very best regards, as always, and my warmest wishes. Cheers! :) john

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/17/2016 7:19:00 AM

John, my friend, how lovely to see you! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a warm way!

Lewis Nyaga

Date: 5/17/2016 1:28:00 AM

An enjoyable write on eagles Demetrios..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/17/2016 7:21:00 AM

Ah, Lewis, I am delighted with your visit and comment dear, friend. Thank you!