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Dream Space

Light as grace is feathery-soft green trellis. Lush canopy-charmed, sweet embellish Does embrace my eager face While glad fingers trace My dream leaves Space. Perfect peace In willows grand place Where fantasies freely race Thru splendid majesty I relish. Light as grace is feathery-soft green trellis. ... CayCay Jennings

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Skat A

Date: 10/21/2015 9:30:00 PM

CayCay, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2015 4:46:00 PM

Loved your 'dream space,' CayCay. Beautiful imagery. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 10/18/2015 2:58:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2015 9:01:00 PM

Caycay, your rhymes were not always exact. That is the only reason this is lower than it should be. the imagery is outstanding!! congrats in my contest.

James Inman

Date: 10/6/2015 8:16:00 AM

I want to live in your dream space, CayCay.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 11:50:00 PM

What a sweet comment. I once wrote a Weeping Willow poem about it being the perfect tree house, only I'd want to live under the splendid branches. Thank you, James ... CayCay

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/6/2015 5:54:00 AM

Wow. Splendid word choice and such a perfect shape. Dreamy...I expect a high placement! hugs!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 11:49:00 PM

Wow is my favorite - don't know why, but I love getting a wow. Thank you so much, Kim, for your encouraging comments ... CayCay

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2015 6:04:00 PM

Caycay, oh so beautifully penned for the contest, a feathery 7 ~/

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 11:48:00 PM

Thank you so much for your uplifting and kind words. I know that you will write a beautiful entry ... CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 10/5/2015 4:45:00 PM

I tried this form once before, but somehow went out of point:( You appear to have followed the rules well, and the content is pleasurable. gl in the contest, CayCay! Regards // paul

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 11:47:00 PM

My printer isn't working so I carefully copied the directions word for word and consulted them often - it is challenging. I am so glad you enjoyed it and told me so ... CayCay

Michael Tor

Date: 10/5/2015 4:17:00 PM

CayCay very difficult form to master. You have done this very well.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 11:46:00 PM

Oh, Michael - thank you so very much, very, very ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2015 3:54:00 PM

you penned this so beautifully Caycay I still haven't started mine - it is quite a challenging form:-) hugs jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/6/2015 11:45:00 PM

Jan, your compliments have such matter and meaning to me - thank you. I know you will pen an absolutely beautiful poem and I look forward to enjoying it ... CayCay