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Dream should not Taste this Lonely

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Dream should not Taste this Lonely


Between these green cotton 
I start to hop over the chunks of 
dark chocolates, hop by hop
I love this dream; creamy and 
-A dreamy dream-

Where not very far I can see a 
Built with wafers covered by 
warm dip of choco 
It’s moist outside but what I think 
of, could it run dry?
-How our covers always tricky, ask 
me why-

The thunder is rumbling, an 
lollipop twist up there
They swirl up those light blues and 
spread the dark, 
Trying to suck anything inside
Look at those skies, from then to 
these shades of dark?
I wonder who could survive that 
wonderful and deadening stark?
-Funny how light can turn to grey-

One biggest thunder calls me, 
I’m charmed by its mighty voice 
Scared at first, I try to repel 
But hey, the more I try the more I 
want to go closer
About the danger? I don’t think I 
care for more
-Interesting how curiosity fertilize 
your brave-

Is this where I live now? 
Or my delusion has taken over my 
brain and sanity?
That house is near but million 
steps I’ve made 
Nobody’s here only my small me
-I believe dream should not taste 
this lonely-

Inspired by "Between Dreams and 
Sponsored by  Tracie ~*~ Indigo 

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  1. Date: 8/8/2012 4:54:00 AM
    Ok.....don't vanish all of a sudden....give hints...

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 1:27:00 AM
    wow! I love that line .... -I believe dream should not taste this lonely- did you really dream that sweet candy dream? this is a great write DInda, you open it with sweet then it moves to something a lil' bit painful then darker. a wonderful poem. thanks for your visit n kind comment. good luck on the contest

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 9:24:00 AM
    superbly imaginative and creativity to impress.. Dinda.. never heard of a house so sweet and tempting .. good luck in contest.. I am still recovering from hand surgery. long process and therapy too..luv..

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 8:34:00 AM
    Good luck in the contest with this expressive and creative work..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 1/22/2012 8:35:00 PM
    This is very imaginative, Dinda. And the way you ended it "dream should not taste this lonely" what an awesome line that was to end it on!!!

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 11:46:00 PM
    Dinda,,,, good luck in the contest...thank you for sharing,, forever & ever,.. PD

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 11:13:00 AM
    You`re right,dream should not taste lonely,Dinda:) I lovely write,it flows smoothly as I read it.Thanks for sharing it..Arild

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 1/21/2012 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry, "I think it is a lovely write" it should be:) Im being a bit too fast,lol