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Dream On

DREAM ON I dream on, from my dome to my chest to my toes and to the tips of my palms. We dream on, in the land of the free, but where freedom comes at a cost and sacrifice for others the achieve their dream. I dream on, flying over an icy mountain top, To the sweat taste of lemon drops, To the cool relief of mist burning over a desert black top as I brain storm lessoning to heart beat of my favorite song. We dream on, from the top of lonely tropical island hill top to the sit and the smell of a breath taking Forrest and to a falling sun afflicting a shining sea that is the best part of the day I rather spend ending enjoying with a beautiful woman... the sit and the breeze. Poetry by Keith K. Relf

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/2/2012 11:22:00 PM
thats real pretty
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:30:00 AM
Keith congrats on your win, breath it in..David
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/29/2012 1:34:00 PM
thanks :)
Date: 6/28/2012 2:42:00 PM
GREAT ways to relax. Very nice poem, Keith and big congrats to you.
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/29/2012 1:35:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 6/27/2012 8:38:00 PM
You know how to enjoy relaxation. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/28/2012 12:00:00 AM
thanks for the grad :D
Date: 6/27/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Keith. Love, Carol
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/28/2012 12:02:00 AM
thank you , C. Browm
Date: 6/27/2012 8:59:00 AM
As you dream on....you have invited us to this dreamy poem! Thank you!!
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/28/2012 12:04:00 AM
thank you
Date: 6/27/2012 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Keith xx
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Keith Relf
Date: 6/28/2012 12:03:00 AM
thanks
Date: 6/26/2012 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem winning. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 5/18/2012 6:57:00 PM
Good work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/17/2012 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Keith. Love, Carol
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/17/2012 3:41:00 PM
thanks for positive comment, Carol.
Date: 5/16/2012 3:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Keith. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/16/2012 3:59:00 PM
wow.. i am almost surprised... my hard work paid off, that was one of my best poems, thank you.
Date: 5/16/2012 1:26:00 AM
Keith congrats on your win..David
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/16/2012 11:48:00 AM
really? wow thanks, the sky is the limit from here !
Date: 5/16/2012 12:12:00 AM
KEITH, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/16/2012 11:50:00 AM
wow this is too much... thanks, the sky is the limit from her!
Date: 5/8/2012 9:56:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Keith. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 6:16:00 AM
Very good dream poem Keith, have a lovely flying.... - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Keith Relf
Date: 5/9/2012 1:30:00 PM
thanks

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