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Secret Lover

The sullen wind and the rain thundered, and withdrawing my dripping cloak, I let my damp hair fall, going to him, I made my smooth white shoulder bare, my raven hair tangled, I whispered, "I love you" . . . I had come through the night to be with him, he stroked my cheek and I wound my hair in his fingers, kissing my throat, I sighed and closed my eyes, his lips burned with his desire . . . My head, he clasped to his thundering chest, and his tears came falling down, we stayed together all the night long, and still we have not stirred . . . ______________________________________ November 11, 2012 Poetry/Verse/Secret Lover Copyright Protected, ID 11-435-083-11 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Submitted to Late August 2018 Standard Contest, Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/2018 First Place ______________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Best Romantic Poem, sponsor, Skat, Third Place (2015)

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Date: 8/26/2018 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So romantic.
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Date: 8/24/2018 12:30:00 AM
great write - hooked me though am past these times.
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:06:00 PM
Great images, Constance! Congrats!
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Date: 8/23/2018 1:11:00 PM
Oh, that last stanza....an open ended conclusion leaving so may interpretations. Beautifully written...
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Date: 8/26/2015 3:10:00 AM
Wow...what a beautiful way to say "I Love You". Deserves my 7.
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:26:00 PM
BW, this is very romantic! Congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/25/2015 7:17:00 PM
Congrats, Broken, nicely written :)
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Date: 8/25/2015 5:59:00 PM
Enjoyed, congratulations
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:40:00 AM
Wonderful write broken, full of emotive expression! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/24/2015 10:54:00 PM
Broken. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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Date: 11/12/2012 2:57:00 PM
just love the magical feel to this, my friend
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Date: 11/11/2012 8:24:00 PM
You have masterfully created a magnificent and wondrous write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this perfect and majestic poem this evening! What a delightful and gorgeous piece, Great Work!!
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