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Dream Lover

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Dream Lover

Beating drum resounding,
common thoughts confounding.
Emotions striped bare
confusion is there.

Feeling for him
whilst knowing,
this love may
not be worth showing.

Chances slim
yet hope begins.
Ignoring past,
heart beating fast.

Woefully smitten
by love
I was bitten.

Dreams of fantasy
hopes for ecstasy,
just wanting 
you next to me.

Night fades to day
and again
he vanishes away.

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  1. Date: 6/8/2010 9:39:00 AM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Bridget. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 9:42:00 PM
    I love this poem. I am a huge sucker for 'dream fantasy' poems. Well done. Chris.

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 8:05:00 PM
    nice write, i like the line where you said "chances slim",, that's new for me lol, enjoyed ...p.d.